ElectraVentures's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meat]

Overall very nice. Might want to use a larger canvas size because you can see the lines get jagged. Also if you include words again you may want to make then a little bigger. But overall good, keep it up.

Dingh responds:

Thank you very much for the advice! I will try to apply it in the other works

[Knight and Squire 26/01/21]

I like the striking nature the branches take against the sky.

STearleArt responds:

Thank you!

[Portal 2]

Nice work. The only thing is some of the flame looks like it could use one more frame. Otherwise very good, keep it up.

aleha84 responds:

i know it. But then i spent more then 5 days on one scene it becomes boring and hard. But i'm totally agreed. THe more frames in animation the more smooth it looks

[quick Wyit]

Good colors and a good sense of motion. Keep up the good work.

reaganlodge responds:

Hey thank you so much!

[The Void Skeleton, Krak]

Good use of vibrant colors, perhaps a bit too chaotic but perhaps not. Keep it up.

SnapKrakPop responds:

aw yea criticism this is what i came for, Thank you Very much!!!!

[Mummy rat 19/10/2020]

Very nice, I do hate when people say this or that reminds them of such and such so forgive me for being one of them. This reminds me of redwall if you have never heard of it its a children's series about rodents that kind of follows the knights of the round table. It was very brutal for a children's series though. Memories aside I enjoy the crosshatching and the work on lighting and shadows.

STearleArt responds:

Thank you kindly! I've actually a huge fan of redwall, currently reading Mattimeo.

[I hope one of my exes sees this]

Nice job. The knees are a bit off, one seems much lower then the other, which couldn't be due to perspective because that would be a very wide stance to cause the knees to be that different. Hands seem too stiff, we hold our hands with our fingers usual not touching each other(Unless that was intentional because its robotic) and leads to less of an interesting composition. Shoulders and wrists are a bit small(again if its supposed to because of robot reasons thats fine) . Crotch line is odd it looks like the pants are armor? But its not clear which leads to it just looking like the lighting is wrong. Neck is a bit small and the eye is a bit large(Understandable if thats the style but you asked about anatomy). Shading is good, color scheme is good. Good work keep it up.

MoeAnguish responds:

Thank you! you're right about the knees, but the rest is basically because she's a robot and i wanted to emphasize that in less obvious ways, like a stiff stance and such. also, the pants is made of metal (and so is the rest of the statue) which is why i made them shinier than normal pants. as for the eye, I'm going for an anime style so it's not much of anatomy thing.

[Creskin, the Old Fisherman]

Nice work.

CobGoblin responds:

Thank you!

[Final Statement]

Very good use of colors and motion. Truly impressive.

reaganlodge responds:

hey thanks Electra!

[Eclipse]

Very nice work with a limited color palate. What program do you use for these?

Crunkerton responds:

Thank you, these are done in Clip Paint Studio.